Discussion Essay: Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Discussion Essay β Practice 2Same essay type, different question. This time you'll discuss study methods. Remember: you must present both sides fairly before giving your own opinion.
Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
(Based on a question from IELTS Academic, November 2025)
Paraphrase the question + acknowledge both views + signal you will discuss both
Present the best arguments FOR studying in groups β collaborative learning, diverse perspectives, motivation, social skills
Present the best arguments FOR studying alone β personal pace, deep concentration, no distractions, self-discipline
Give your opinion clearly + brief justification or synthesis
From your own experience β which study method works better? What are the advantages of each approach?
Notice: both views are presented fairly with balanced language. Only the conclusion states a personal preference. The opinion is that both approaches have merit, and the best method depends on context.
Discussion language from the model:
"Those who advocate for... argue that..." β introduces a view neutrally
"Proponents of... emphasise..." β presents the view without commitment
"Furthermore, it is widely recognised that..." β distancing phrase
"Conversely, proponents of... contend that..." β signals contrast clearly
"It could be argued that..." β hedging language (shows this is one perspective)
"Having weighed both arguments, I believe..." β opinion only in conclusion
"Research on learning preferences confirms that..." β evidence supports a point
Look at your Practice 1 (working from home) and Practice 2 (study methods) discussions. What language patterns do they share?
Discuss: Is group study or solo study more effective for students? Give your opinion.
The question of whether students benefit more from collaborative or individual study remains a subject of ongoing debate among educators. While those who advocate for group learning emphasise peer interaction and shared understanding, proponents of solo study highlight the importance of personal focus and self-paced learning. This essay will examine both perspectives before offering a balanced conclusion.
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Present the best arguments FOR group study fairly β even if you personally prefer solo study.
Those who favour studying in groups argue that collaborative learning offers significant cognitive benefits. Discussing concepts with peers allows students to articulate their understanding, encounter alternative viewpoints, and identify gaps in their knowledge. Furthermore, it is widely recognised that group study fosters social skills and increases motivation through peer accountability. Moreover, the diversity of perspectives within a study group can illuminate complex topics in ways that solitary review cannot.
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Now present the other side with equal fairness. Use transition language like "Conversely," or "On the other hand,"
Conversely, proponents of independent study contend that focused, uninterrupted concentration is essential for deep learning. It could be argued that solo study allows learners to progress at their own pace, revisiting difficult material without the pressure of keeping up with others. Research on learning preferences confirms that introverted students and those with certain learning needs often achieve better results in solitary environments. Additionally, solo study eliminates distractions and enables students to develop self-disciplineβa critical skill for long-term academic success.
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This is where your opinion finally appears. You can agree with one view, synthesise both, or offer a nuanced position.
Having weighed both arguments, I believe that the most effective approach is neither purely individual nor purely collaborative, but rather a combination of both. Group study strengthens understanding and motivation, while solo study builds concentration and self-reliance. The optimal strategy depends on the subject matter, the learning objective, and the individual student's preferences.
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Read it as one piece. Does it sound balanced? Does your opinion only appear in the conclusion?