SHORT STORIES, LONG SHADOWS · B2/C1 · 50 min

Idgah

Premchand's story of a festival morning, an orphan boy with three coins in his pocket, and the least exciting present ever bought at a fair.

Today: you'll follow a five-year-old who wins an argument against four richer friends with nothing but a pair of iron tongs and a gift for persuasion — and you'll learn the markers he uses to build a case: besides, what's more, after all, not to mention, let alone.
Warm up — before we read. Talk these through out loud. There are no wrong answers.
Discuss:
  • Think of a festival day from your childhood. What did you spend your money on — and what do you remember about it now?
  • What's the best present you've ever been given that wasn't fun or exciting at all, but useful? Why did it matter?
  • Children are often better at arguing than adults. Why do you think that is?

Now — the words for today's story

Ten words unlock the story. Work through the four activities — say your answer out loud before you reveal it.

A · What do they mean here? Work it out from the sentence

1. His friends had twelve or fifteen coins each. Hamid had three — a pittance, hardly enough for a single ride on the wheel.
a pittance (n) — a very small, inadequate amount of money: to work for a pittance, to be paid a pittance. Always negative — it implies unfairness or poverty.
2. The shopkeeper asked six coins. Hamid offered three. The man laughed, Hamid walked away, the man called him back — they haggled like two old merchants.
to haggle (v) — to argue about the price of something until you agree: haggle over the price. Near neighbour: to bargain (slightly more neutral). In some cultures it's expected; in others, embarrassing.
3. "Look at Hamid's tongs! Is he going to make bread at the fair?" They held their sweets up in front of his face and taunted him.
to taunt (v) — to say cruel or mocking things to upset someone, often by showing them what they haven't got. Stronger than to tease, which can be friendly. Noun: taunts.

B · Which word means…?

Three words from the story: fragile · sturdy · relent. Say the right word, then reveal.

1. Which word means strong, solid and not easily broken?
sturdy (adj) — sturdy boots, a sturdy table, a sturdy little boy. Used of objects and of people: physically strong and well built.
2. Which word means easily broken or damaged?
fragile (adj) — Fragile — handle with care. Also figurative: a fragile peace, a fragile economy, a fragile ego. BrE /ˈfrædʒaɪl/, AmE /ˈfrædʒəl/.
3. Which verb means to stop refusing and finally agree to something, after being firm?
to relent (v) — "At first the shopkeeper refused, but eventually he relented." Adjective: relentless = never stopping, never giving up — which describes Hamid rather well.

C · Choose the meaning — a / b / c

1. He put the iron tongs on his shoulder like a soldier's rifle and swaggered back to his friends. To swagger is to…
  (a) walk slowly because something is heavy   (b) walk in a very confident, proud way   (c) walk nervously, looking around
(b) — to swagger (v) = to walk or behave with exaggerated confidence. Noun: swagger. It can be admiring or critical depending on context.
2. His grandmother had scrimped for weeks to buy flour and sugar for the festival meal. To scrimp is to…
  (a) borrow money from neighbours   (b) work extra hours   (c) spend as little as possible to save money
(c) — to scrimp (v), very often in the pair to scrimp and save: "They scrimped and saved to send her to university."

D · Word building & collocation

1. At the end, the old woman's anger disappears and her face becomes soft and tearful. Complete the collocation: the gift ___ her heart. Then: a story that makes you very sad is heart-___, and one that makes you feel warm and happy is heart-___.
The gift melted her heart · heartbreaking (or heart-rending) · heartwarming. Also: to tug at your heartstrings = to make you feel strong sympathy.
2. At first the friends mock Hamid; by the end they are offering him their toys just to hold his tongs. Complete the idiom for a situation where the person who was losing is now winning: the ___ have turned.
the tables have turned (or to turn the tables on someone) — from board games, where players turned the table round to swap positions. "Hamid turned the tables on his friends."

Now use them — out loud

Talk it through before we read:
  • Using pittance, haggle, sturdy and fragile, predict what a poor child might buy at a fair, and why his friends might laugh.
  • Sort today's words into words about money, words about objects and words about behaviour. Which word fits in two groups?

The story, in three parts

Premchand's story, retold here in English and shortened. Read each part. After it, there's a quick comprehension check (try the questions from memory first), then one thing to discuss.

Before you read: Eid al-Fitr is the festival at the end of Ramadan, the Muslim month of fasting. An Idgah is a large open-air prayer ground outside a town, where people gather for the Eid prayers. A paisa (plural paise) was the smallest Indian coin.

Part 1 — Three paise

Thirty days of fasting were over, and this was the morning of Eid. How beautiful it was! The trees looked greener, the fields brighter, the sky a softer blue; even the sun seemed to be wishing everyone a happy festival. The village was full of noise and hurry. One man was sewing a button on his only good shirt, another was running to borrow a pair of shoes. But nobody was happier than the children. Again and again they took out their treasure, counted it, and put it carefully back in their pockets. Mahmood had twelve paise. Mohsin had fifteen.

Hamid had three. He was a thin little boy of four or five, and the happiest of them all. His father had died of cholera the year before, and his mother, growing paler and paler, had followed him. Now Hamid lived with his grandmother, Amina, and slept in her lap, and was perfectly content. She had told him that his father had gone away to earn money and would come back with sacks of silver, and that his mother had gone to visit Allah and would bring him wonderful things. Hope is a great treasure. Hamid had no shoes and his cap was torn, but when his parents came home, he would have everything his heart desired.

Amina sat in her dark little room and wept. There was hardly a grain of food in the house. She had scrimped for weeks, and still it was not enough. And how could she let a child of five walk three miles to the Idgah, without shoes on his feet? But Hamid ran in, his face shining. "Don't be afraid, Granny. I'll be the first one back!" So she gave him three paise — a pittance, but all she could spare — and watched him run off down the road with the others.

Quick check — answer from memory, then reveal:

1. What has happened to Hamid's parents, and what has his grandmother told him about them?

2. Why is Amina crying while the children are celebrating?

1. Both have died — his father of cholera, his mother soon after. Amina has told him his father has gone to earn money and his mother has gone to visit God, and that both will come back with gifts.

2. Because she is very poor: there is almost no food for the festival, Hamid has no shoes, and she is worried about letting such a small child walk three miles to the Idgah.

Discuss:
  • "Hope is a great treasure," says the narrator. Is Amina right to tell Hamid a comforting lie about his parents? What would you have done?

Part 2 — The fair

On the way, the town amazed them. There were great houses with gardens, colleges full of grown men with moustaches still studying, a police station, and a sweet shop piled high with sugary pyramids. Mohsin told them that genies brought the shopkeeper money every night; Mahmood said the policemen were thieves themselves. Hamid listened to it all with wide eyes, and walked faster, his bare feet hot on the dusty road.

At the Idgah, thousands of people stood in long rows under the tamarind trees. When the prayers began, every row bowed together and knelt together, again and again, as if a thousand lamps had been lit on a single thread. Then everyone embraced, and the children ran for the fair.

There were merry-go-rounds with wooden horses, and the friends paid a paisa each and went round and round while Hamid watched. There were painted clay toys — a soldier, a water-carrier, a lawyer in a black coat. Mahmood bought the soldier, Mohsin the water-carrier, Noor the lawyer. Hamid wanted one badly, but he only said, "They're made of clay. Drop them and they'll break." Then came the sweet stalls. "Hamid, have one!" said Mohsin, holding one out — and, when Hamid reached for it, put it in his own mouth. Everyone laughed.

Beyond the sweets was a shop selling ironware, and there Hamid stopped. On the counter lay a pair of iron tongs. He thought of his grandmother making bread on the hot griddle with her bare hands, burning her fingers every single day. What use was a toy? Sweets were gone in a minute. But tongs would last for years. "How much?" "Six paise." Hamid's heart sank. "Three?" he said, and began to walk away. The man watched him go, then relented: "Come on, then. Three." Hamid put the tongs on his shoulder like a rifle and swaggered back to his friends.

Quick check — answer from memory, then reveal:

1. What do Hamid's friends spend their money on, and what does Hamid say about the toys?

2. Why does Hamid buy the tongs, and how does he get them for three paise?

1. Rides on the merry-go-round, painted clay toys (a soldier, a water-carrier, a lawyer) and sweets. Hamid says the toys are clay and will break if they fall.

2. Because his grandmother burns her fingers every day making bread. He offers three paise and walks away; the shopkeeper relents and calls him back.

Discuss:
  • Is Hamid's speech about the clay toys honest wisdom, or is he protecting himself because he can't afford them? Can it be both?

Part 3 — The tongs and the toys

"Tongs!" laughed Mohsin. "Are you going to make bread at the fair?" "On my shoulder they're a rifle," said Hamid calmly. "In my hand they're a fakir's tongs — I can play music on them. Besides, one blow and every one of your toys would be finished." "My water-carrier brings water every day," said Mohsin. "And what happens when he gets wet? After all, he's only mud. What's more, put my tongs in the fire and they'll come out smiling." One by one the friends went quiet. Soon they were offering their toys just to hold the tongs for a moment. The tables had turned. By evening, Mahmood's soldier had lost a leg, Mohsin's water-carrier lay in pieces on the step, and Noor's lawyer had fallen from a high shelf. The tongs remained.

When Hamid ran in, his grandmother stared. "Tongs? You foolish boy! It's almost midday, you've had nothing to eat or drink, and you spent your money on tongs?" Hamid answered, a little guiltily: "Your fingers burn on the griddle. So I bought them." Her anger was gone in an instant. This child had stood at the fair while the others ate, and thought of her. Her heart melted. She took him in her arms and wept, and blessed him again and again, her tears falling on his head. Hamid could not understand why. And here is the strangest thing of all: the little boy Hamid had played the part of an old man, and old Amina had become a little girl again.

Quick check — answer from memory, then reveal:

1. Give three arguments Hamid uses to win against his friends.

2. What happens to the clay toys, and how does Amina react to the tongs — first, and then?

1. Any three: the tongs are a rifle or a musical instrument; one blow would break all the toys; clay melts when wet; the tongs survive even fire.

2. All three break by evening. Amina is first angry that he wasted his money and went hungry; when he explains that her fingers burn, she is overwhelmed with love, weeps and blesses him.

Discuss:
  • "The little boy Hamid had played the part of an old man, and old Amina had become a little girl again." What does this final sentence mean to you? Is it happy or sad?

Grammar — discourse markers for winning an argument

Hamid has no money and no toy, and he still wins. His secret is structure: he doesn't just say my tongs are better; he adds a reason, then another, then a stronger one, then reminds everyone of something they can't deny. English has a set of small words for exactly those moves.

The four moves of an argument:
• Add a point — besides, what's more, on top of that, as well as that: "Besides, one blow and your toys are finished."
• Add a decisive point — after all (= remember this fact that everyone knows): "After all, he's only mud."
• Dismiss what came before — anyway, in any case: "Anyway, a toy is gone in a day."
• Concede, then win — even so, all the same, that said: "Your soldier is beautiful. Even so, he can't protect anyone."
Careful: after all at the start of a sentence gives a reason; at the end it means "in spite of what we expected": "The tongs were a good idea after all."
Building the pile (C1): not to mention, let alone, if anything.
• not to mention adds an extra point as if it were obvious: "The toys are fragile, not to mention overpriced."
• let alone follows a negative and introduces something even less possible: "Your soldier can't stand up, let alone fight a lion."
• if anything corrects someone by going in the opposite direction: "Tongs aren't boring. If anything, they're the most exciting thing at the fair."
Use one or two per argument. Five in a row sounds like a lawyer — and we know what happened to Noor's lawyer.

1. Choose the marker — besides · after all · anyway

Use each once.

1. "Why should I buy a clay toy? , it's only mud — everyone knows mud breaks."

2. "Tongs are useful in the kitchen. , I can play music on them."

3. "Laugh if you like. , I'm happy with my choice."

1. After all (a reason everyone already accepts)   2. Besides (an extra point)   3. Anyway (dismissing what came before)

2. Not to mention, let alone or if anything?

Complete each sentence with the right expression.

1. Amina couldn't afford shoes for Hamid, new clothes for the festival.

2. The tongs weren't a waste of money. , they were the best thing he could have bought.

3. The sweets were sticky and unhealthy, gone in a minute.

1. let alone (after a negative: even less possible)   2. If anything (correction in the opposite direction)   3. not to mention (an extra, "obvious" point)

3. Hamid's closing speech — complete the paragraph

Fill each gap with one marker from this lesson, then perform the speech aloud as Hamid.

"You think my tongs are boring. , they're the most exciting thing at the fair. On my shoulder they're a rifle. , in my hand they're a musical instrument. Your soldier can't hold a gun, win a battle. Your water-carrier is very nice. , the first rain will wash him away. And your lawyer is fragile, ugly. , they're only made of clay. , you can laugh all you like — my grandmother will never burn her fingers again."

If anything · What's more / Besides · let alone · Even so / All the same · not to mention · After all · Anyway / In any case

Notice the shape: correction → addition → impossibility → concession → extra point → the fact no one can deny → dismissal. A complete argument in seven moves.

Hold on to these structures — in the Speak tab you'll narrate the story and then win an argument of your own.

Going deeper

Premchand (1880–1936), born Dhanpat Rai Srivastava near Varanasi, is often called the greatest writer of modern Hindi and Urdu fiction. He wrote around three hundred short stories and more than a dozen novels, many about the rural poor of north India — peasants, widows, labourers, children. He lost both his parents young and knew poverty well. "Idgah" first appeared in 1933, three years before his death, and is still one of the most widely read stories in South Asia, studied in schools in India and Pakistan alike.

The craft. Look at how Premchand controls what we know. The narrator tells us the truth about Hamid's parents at the start, so that every hopeful thing Hamid believes afterwards hurts a little. The fair is described through a child's eyes — rides, colours, sweets, toys — so that the tongs, heavy and grey, stand out like a stone among flowers. The argument is pure comedy: a five-year-old turning a kitchen tool into a rifle and a hero, and winning by logic and imagination. Then Premchand destroys the toys one by one, almost like a fable. And he holds back the most important information until the very end: we have guessed why Hamid bought the tongs, but Amina hasn't, and we watch her anger turn to tears. The final sentence reverses the two characters' ages — the child has acted like an old man, the old woman becomes a child — and that reversal is the story's long shadow: what poverty asks of children, and what love gives back.
Talk it through:
  • We know about Hamid's parents from the start; Hamid doesn't. How does that change the way we read every happy moment in the story?
  • The friends are not villains — Mohsin is cruel with the sweet, but they all share their toys in the end. How does Premchand make them believable children?
  • The three clay toys are a soldier, a water-carrier and a lawyer. Is it an accident that they stand for power, work and law? What happens to each?
  • Some readers find the ending deeply moving; others find a five-year-old who thinks only of his grandmother's fingers sad, even disturbing. Which side are you on?

Speak

This is the heart of the lesson — do all of it out loud. The timer is there to keep you going: fill the time with detail rather than racing through it.

Useful language: lean on today's grammar — besides, what's more, after all, even so, not to mention, let alone, if anything. For telling the story: "It all starts on…", "Meanwhile, back at home…", "The turning point comes when…", "What nobody expects is…".
Time remaining: 4:00
Task A · Narrate the whole story (4 minutes)

Tell Idgah as if to someone who has never read it, and save the reason for the tongs until the very end, the way Premchand does. Move through the arc: Eid morning and the counting of coins → Hamid, his parents, his grandmother's tears → the prayers → rides, toys, sweets, the teasing → the iron shop and the haggling → the great argument → the broken toys → Amina's anger, and then her tears.

Use at least four discourse markers from today (including one let alone) and at least five key words (pittance, haggle, taunt, fragile, sturdy, relent, swagger, scrimp, melt someone's heart, the tables have turned).

Task B · The great tongs debate (4 minutes)

Be Hamid's lawyer. Argue that the tongs were the best purchase at the fair; the other side argues that a five-year-old deserves one day of fun, and that a child buying kitchen tools is a sign that something is wrong. Use the four moves: add, add a decisive point, concede and win, dismiss.

Then argue the opposite for one minute — the harder direction is where the language comes from.

Task C · Gifts, money and childhood (4 minutes)

The story is about what we choose to spend on, and why. Talk about it in your own life.

Stuck for an idea? Pick one of these and run with it:

  • The most useful present you have ever given or received. Convince your partner it beats any "fun" present.
  • Pocket money: should children be free to waste it, or taught to spend it wisely? Defend a position.
  • Describe a festival in your country through the eyes of a five-year-old: sounds, colours, food, money.
  • Haggling: do you do it? Where is it normal, and where would it be embarrassing? Teach your partner how to haggle well.
  • Children who grow up too early — caring for parents or grandparents, working, worrying about money. What do they gain, and what do they lose?
  • "Sturdy, not fragile": name something you've owned for twenty years. Why has it lasted, and why have you kept it?

To finish — the bigger questions

  1. Hamid believes a comforting lie about his parents. Will the story stay happy when he learns the truth? How do you imagine him at fifteen?
  2. Is Hamid's sacrifice something to admire, or something a better world wouldn't ask of a child?
  3. Premchand wrote about the poor for readers who were mostly not poor. What do you think he wanted those readers to feel — and to do?
  4. Before you go — from memory: make the case for the tongs in three sentences using besides, let alone and after all — and explain how after all changes meaning at the end of a sentence.