SHORT STORIES, LONG SHADOWS · A2/B1 · 50 min

To Build a Fire

One man. One dog. Seventy-five degrees below zero. The man is not afraid — and that is the problem.

Today: tell the story of a man who walks alone through the snow on the coldest day of the year — and of the dog who knows more than he does. Grammar: comparatives — colder than, colder and colder, more and more dangerous.

Key words — learn them, then make your guess

First, let's learn eight words. Read each word and its sentence, guess the meaning, then click Reveal to check. Say each word out loud.

1. A trail is a small path in wild country — in a forest or in the snow. You walk on a trail when there is no road.
a trail (noun) — a small path in wild country.
2. When water freezes, it becomes ice. When it is very cold, rivers freeze — and fingers can freeze too. (Past: froze, frozen.)
to freeze (froze, frozen) (verb) — to become ice; to become very, very cold.
3. A match is a small stick of wood. You strike it, and it makes a little flame — and with the flame, you can make a fire.
a match (noun) — a small wooden stick that makes fire.
4. When your socks are wet, there is water in them. The opposite of wet is dry.
wet (adjective) — with water in it or on it. Opposite: dry.
5. A warning is when someone tells you: "Be careful! This is dangerous!" A red flag at the beach is a warning.
a warning (noun) — words or a sign that say: be careful, danger!
6. You are alone when nobody is with you — no friend, no family. Just you.
alone (adjective) — with no other person.
7. Instinct is a feeling inside an animal (or a person) that says "danger!" or "run!". Nobody teaches it — you are born with it.
instinct (noun) — a natural feeling that helps animals and people know what to do.
8. A camp is the place where your friends, your food and your warm fire wait for you at the end of the day.
a camp (noun) — a place in the wild where people sleep, eat and have a fire.

Now guess the story — out loud

Before we read:
  • The story has: a man walking alone in the snow · a dog · seventy-five degrees below zero · an old man's warning · wet feet · one fire. What do you think happens? Tell your idea in full sentences.
  • Quick question: what is the coldest weather you have ever felt? What did you wear?

The story, in three parts

Read each part. Then try the questions from memory, and talk about the last one.

Part 1 — The cold day

It was a very cold morning in the Yukon, in the far north. There was snow everywhere. A man walked alone on a small trail. It was seventy-five degrees below zero — so cold that his spit froze in the air. But the man was not afraid. He was new to the north, and he thought: "Cold is only a number. I am fast and strong. I will be fine."

A big dog walked behind him. The dog was not happy. It did not know numbers, but its instinct said: "This is too cold. It is dangerous to walk today."

An old man in the camp had given the man a warning: "Never travel alone when it is colder than fifty below. Take a friend with you." The man remembered the warning — and laughed. "Old men are afraid of everything," he thought. He wanted to reach the camp by six o'clock. His friends waited there, with a warm fire and hot food.

Quick check — answer from memory, then reveal:

1. How cold is it, and how does the man feel about it?

2. What was the old man's warning?

1. Seventy-five degrees below zero — but the man is not afraid. He thinks cold is only a number, and he is strong.

2. "Never travel alone when it is colder than fifty below. Take a friend with you." The man laughed at it.

Talk about it:
  • The dog is afraid, but the man is not. Who is right? How does the dog "know"?

Part 2 — Wet feet

Under the snow there was a hidden danger: spring water. In some places, the water never froze. The snow on top looked safe — but it was not. Suddenly the man broke through the snow, into the water. His legs were wet up to the knees.

Wet feet in that cold are very dangerous. Feet freeze fast. The man knew this. He was angry, but not afraid. "This is only a small problem," he thought. "I will build a fire and dry my socks. I will lose one hour, that is all."

He collected small dry sticks and built a fire under a big tree. The fire grew and grew. The man felt warm and happy. "The old man was wrong," he smiled. "I am alone, and I am fine. I saved myself."

Quick check — answer from memory, then reveal:

1. What happens to the man's feet, and why is it dangerous?

2. Where does he build his fire, and how does he feel then?

1. He breaks through the snow into hidden water. His legs are wet to the knees — and in that cold, wet feet freeze very fast.

2. Under a big tree. He feels warm and happy, and he thinks the old man's warning was wrong.

Talk about it:
  • The man says: "This is only a small problem." Is he right? What would you do in his place?

Part 3 — The snow falls

But the man made one big mistake. He built his fire under the tree. The branches of the tree were full of snow. Each time he pulled a stick from the tree, the branches moved a little. Then, suddenly, all the snow fell from the tree — onto the fire. The fire was dead.

Now, at last, the man was afraid. His fingers were freezing. He tried to make a new fire, but his fingers could not hold the matches. Every minute he was colder and colder. He got up and ran. He ran and ran, but the camp was too far. He fell, and he could not get up.

Then the man became calm. "I cannot fight the cold," he thought. "I will meet death quietly, like a man." He closed his eyes and went to sleep in the snow.

The dog waited. Then it smelled death, and it was afraid. It turned and trotted up the trail — to the camp, to the fire, and to the food.

Quick check — answer from memory, then reveal:

1. Why does the fire die?

2. What does the dog do at the end?

1. He built it under a tree full of snow. He moved the branches when he pulled sticks, and the snow fell on the fire.

2. It smells death, turns, and trots up the trail to the camp — to the fire and the food.

Talk about it:
  • The dog does not cry. It just goes to the camp. Is this a sad ending, or a natural ending? Why?

Grammar: comparatives

This story is one long comparison: every hour is colder than the last, and the walk becomes more and more dangerous. Let's learn to say it.

colder than — comparing two things:
Short adjectives + -er: "The night is colder than the day." "The dog was faster than the man."
Long adjectives → more + adjective: "Wet feet are more dangerous than dry feet."
Irregular: good → better, bad → worse: "A friend on the trail is better than a fire."
colder and colder — when something grows and grows:
Repeat the comparative: "Every minute, the man was colder and colder." "The camp seemed farther and farther away."
Long adjectives → more and more + adjective: "The walk became more and more dangerous."

1. Compare two things

Write the comparative form of the adjective in brackets. Add than if you need it.

1. Seventy-five below is much (cold) fifty below.

2. Wet feet are (dangerous) wet hands.

3. The dog's instinct was (good) the man's thinking.

4. The man thought: "Fear is (bad) cold."

1. colder than

2. more dangerous than

3. better than

4. worse than

2. Growing and growing

Use the pattern -er and -er (or more and more + adjective) with the word in brackets.

1. The day went on, and the man was (cold).

2. The walk became (dangerous).

3. His fingers moved (slowly).

4. The camp seemed (far) away.

1. colder and colder

2. more and more dangerous

3. more and more slowly

4. farther and farther (further and further is also correct)

3. Tell the end of the story

Write the comparative forms. Then read the little story out loud.

The snow fell on the fire, and the fire died. Now the man was in real danger. Every minute he was (cold — it grows and grows), and his hands were (weak) than before. He ran, but the camp was too far. At the end, the dog was (lucky) than the man. It knew one simple thing: in the north, two people are (safe) than one, and a friend is (good) than pride.

colder and colder · weaker · luckier · safer · better

The whole story is one comparison: the man thought he was stronger than the cold. He was wrong.

Going deeper — talk about the big ideas

Now take the story's ideas into the real world. Talk about each one out loud. There are no right answers — say what you think, and use your comparatives!

1 · Dangerous weather

What is the most dangerous weather in your country — heat, snow, storms, rain? What do people do to stay safe? Is winter more dangerous than summer where you live?

2 · Animals know things

The dog knew about the danger before the man did. What things can animals do better than people? Think of dogs, cats, birds. Do you trust an animal's feelings?

3 · Warnings everywhere

We see warnings every day: road signs, weather news, "do not swim here". Why do some people not listen to warnings? Think of a person in a film or in the news who said "It's fine!" — and was wrong.

4 · Alone or together?

Some things are nice to do alone. Some things are dangerous to do alone. Give two examples of each. When is a friend better than a phone?

Speak

This is the most important part of the lesson — do all of it out loud. Use the timer, and try to speak for the whole time.

Useful language: compare things — "colder than", "better than", "colder and colder", "more and more dangerous". Use today's words: trail, freeze, match, wet, dry, warning, alone, instinct, camp.
Time remaining: 3:00
Task A · Tell the story (3 minutes)

Tell the whole story in your own words: the old man's warning → the man walks alone with the dog → the terrible cold → the wet feet → the fire under the tree → the snow falls → the man runs → the end → the dog goes to the camp.

Use colder than at least one time, and colder and colder (or more and more…) at least one time.

Task B · Harder than I thought (3 minutes)

Talk about a time when something was harder than you thought — a job, a trip, a recipe, learning English! What did you think before? What was true? If you prefer, talk about a person in a film or a book who said "This is easy" — and was wrong.

Task C · The old man speaks (3 minutes)

Roleplay: you are the old man in the camp. A young man says: "Tomorrow I will walk to the next camp alone. It's only cold." Give him three warnings. Use comparatives: "The night is colder than the day…", "The trail is more dangerous than you think…"

To finish — easy questions

  1. Which part of the story do you remember best? Why?
  2. The dog cannot speak. If it could speak, what would it say to the man on the trail?
  3. Was the man stupid, or only new to the north? What do you think?
  4. Before you go — from memory: make one sentence with colder than and one with colder and colder (or more and more…) about this story.