SHORT STORIES, LONG SHADOWS · B2/C1 · 50 min

The Lumber Room

Saki's story of a boy in disgrace, a forbidden room, and an aunt defeated by her own rules.

Today: you'll follow a child who wins an argument he was never allowed to have — and you'll learn to compress two clauses into one with participles, the structure that makes written English sound adult: Having checked that nobody was watching, he took the key.
Warm up — before we read. Talk these through out loud. There are no wrong answers.
Discuss:
  • Why is being right in front of an authority figure sometimes more dangerous than being wrong?
  • Where does an adult's authority actually come from — knowledge, position, or the willingness of everyone else to accept it?
  • What was forbidden to you as a child, and what did the prohibition do to your interest in it?

Now — the words for today's story

Ten words unlock the story. Work through the four activities — say your answer out loud before you reveal it.

A · What do they mean here? Work it out from the sentence

1. Nobody addressed a word to him at breakfast, he was excluded from the outing, and every adult in the house looked carefully past him. He was in disgrace.
disgrace (n) — the condition of having lost everyone's approval. In disgrace · to fall from grace · adjective: disgraceful (shocking, of behaviour).
2. She announced the arrangement in a level voice that admitted no discussion, and settled back with the quiet pleasure of somebody whose judgement has been vindicated. Her whole manner was self-satisfied.
self-satisfied (adj) — complacently pleased with one's own rightness. Sharper synonyms: smug, self-righteous. Noun: complacency.
3. She had constructed the punishment, arranged the treat that excluded him, and stationed herself at the garden door. Her vigilance lasted more than an hour.
vigilance (n) — watchful attention, especially against wrongdoing. Adjective: vigilant. Note the irony: hers is total, and entirely misdirected.

B · Which word means…?

Three words from the story: retribution · tapestry · improvise. Say the right word, then reveal.

1. Which word means a heavy woven picture, made of coloured threads, hung on a wall?
a tapestry (n) — literally a woven wall-hanging; figuratively, "a rich tapestry of…" = a complex whole made of many threads.
2. Which word means to invent or perform something with no preparation at all?
to improvise (v) — "He improvised an answer." Noun: improvisation. Also used of meals, shelters and excuses.
3. Which word means deserved punishment, arriving as though by justice rather than accident?
retribution (n) — punishment that feels morally earned. "Swift retribution." Compare the cooler consequences and the biblical just deserts.

C · Choose the meaning — a / b / c

1. The room was forbidden ground, which was precisely what made it irresistible. Something forbidden is…
  (a) locked by accident   (b) officially not allowed   (c) unpleasant to enter
(b) — forbidden (adj, past participle of forbid) = prohibited. Useful collocations: forbidden territory, strictly forbidden, forbidden fruit.
2. Trapped in the tank, unable to climb out and obliged to shout for a child's help, she was thoroughly humiliated. Humiliated means…
  (a) physically hurt   (b) made to feel ashamed and ridiculous in front of others   (c) extremely angry
(b) — humiliated (adj) = stripped of dignity publicly. Noun: humiliation. The thing that causes it: humiliating.

D · Word building & collocation

1. You know to punish. Give the noun, the adjective meaning "extremely severe", and complete: the punishment did not ___ the crime.
punishment (n) · punitive (adj — punitive measures, punitive taxes) · the punishment did not fit the crime.
2. One verb completes all three: to ___ a rule · to ___ your word · to ___ someone's spirit. And which noun means the moment a child stops obeying?
break — break a rule, break your word, break someone's spirit. The noun: defiance (adjective defiant) — which is exactly what Nicholas offers at the water tank.

Now use them — out loud

Talk it through before we read:
  • Using disgrace, vigilance, forbidden and retribution, predict the shape of a contest between a determined aunt and an inventive child.
  • Sort today's words into the language of authority and the language of imagination. Which one does improvise belong to, and why does that matter here?

The story, in three parts

Read each part. After it, there's a quick comprehension check (try the questions from memory first), then one thing to discuss.

Part 1 — The offence of being right

At breakfast Nicholas declined his bread and milk on the grounds that there was a frog in it. Older and wiser and better people informed him that such a thing was out of the question, and that he was not to talk nonsense. He continued, nevertheless, to talk what seemed to them the most obvious nonsense, and described with some particularity the colouring and markings of the alleged frog. The remarkable part of the affair, which none of them considered, was that there really was a frog in his bread and milk. He had put it there himself, and he therefore felt entitled to know something about it.

The sin of taking a frog from the garden and putting it into a bowl of bread and milk was held to be rather serious. The greater offence, though nobody phrased it that way, was that a child of eleven had been demonstrably correct in a matter on which four adults had pronounced with confidence. Retribution followed within the hour. The other children were to be taken that afternoon to the sands at Jagborough — a treat arranged, it seemed, chiefly so that Nicholas could be excluded from it. He was informed of the arrangement several times, with careful emphasis, in case the moral escaped him.

The organiser of these events was not, strictly speaking, an aunt at all; she was somebody else's aunt who had assumed the office. She was also convinced that Nicholas would spend the afternoon attempting to enter the gooseberry garden, which was forbidden. She therefore positioned herself where she could observe the small door leading into it, glancing up from her gardening every few minutes with an air of alert virtue. Nicholas had no intention whatever of going into the gooseberry garden — but he made two or three thoughtful approaches to the door, which kept her at her post for the better part of an hour.

Quick check — answer from memory, then reveal:

1. What did Nicholas claim at breakfast, and what was remarkable about the claim?

2. What is his punishment, and how does he redirect his aunt's vigilance?

1. That there was a frog in his bread and milk. He was told it was impossible — and he was entirely right, having put it there himself.

2. He is excluded from the trip to the sands. He then makes a few deliberate approaches to the forbidden gooseberry door, which keeps his aunt guarding it for nearly an hour while he goes elsewhere.

Discuss:
  • The narrator says the adults never considered that he might be right. What does the story suggest about how authority handles inconvenient evidence?

Part 2 — The room that was worth the wait

Having secured his aunt's attention at the wrong door, Nicholas produced the key he had studied at leisure over several weeks, and admitted himself to the lumber room. It was a place of legend. Entry was forbidden, questions about it went unanswered, and it had accordingly acquired, in his imagination, the status of a treasure house. For once in his experience, the reality exceeded the anticipation.

The room was crowded with objects that had been stored rather than discarded — the difference between a house that throws things away and a house that merely stops looking at them. There was a tapestry stretched on a frame, showing a hunter who had just brought down a stag with an arrow. It would have been a straightforward picture, except that four wolves were coming through the trees behind him. How many arrows did the hunter have left? Could he reach the tree beside him, and would the wolves be able to follow? Nicholas stood in front of it for a long time, conducting the enquiry with the seriousness of a general.

There was more. Candlesticks in the shape of coiled snakes; a teapot modelled as a china duck; a sandalwood box packed tight with brown paper, each piece wrapped as though it mattered; and, best of all, a heavy book of coloured plates showing birds he had never heard of — a mandarin duck, a toucan, a heron — creatures whose existence nobody had bothered to mention to him. He was entirely absorbed. And then, from somewhere out in the garden, came the sound of his aunt calling his name.

Quick check — answer from memory, then reveal:

1. How has the lumber room acquired its reputation, and how does the reality compare?

2. What is happening in the tapestry, and what does Nicholas do with it?

1. Through prohibition and silence: entry is forbidden and questions go unanswered, so his imagination has filled it. Unusually, the room turns out to be better than he had imagined.

2. A hunter has shot a stag but four wolves are approaching behind him. Nicholas treats it as an unfinished problem, working out how many arrows remain and whether the tree offers escape.

Discuss:
  • The narrator lingers on objects that adults have stopped looking at. What is Saki suggesting about who decides that something is finished with?

Part 3 — The theological difficulty

The aunt, prosecuting her search for Nicholas among the gooseberry bushes, had slipped on the wet edge of the rainwater tank and discovered that she could not get out again. Her voice reached him thin and irritable, requiring him to fetch the ladder from beside the cherry tree.

Nicholas came into the forbidden garden and regarded her with courteous interest. Was he permitted to be in the gooseberry garden? He was told, from the tank, that he was not, and instructed to bring the ladder immediately. Would there be strawberry jam for tea? Certainly there would, came the exasperated reply — why on earth did he ask? "Because," said Nicholas, "you told me this morning that there was none, and I happen to know that there are four jars of it in the store cupboard. You know it, and I know it, and you clearly do not know that I know it. Therefore you are not my aunt. You are the Evil One, tempting me." Then, observing that she had assured him only the previous week that no such being existed, he judged the matter closed and walked away, leaving her the last word and no means of using it.

She was extracted, in due course, by the kitchen maid who had come out for parsley. Tea that evening was conducted in a heavy silence. Jagborough had been a failure of the first order: the tide was fully in, so there had been no sands to play on whatever, and one of the children had spent the entire afternoon in boots that did not fit. The aunt sat in the frozen dignity of a person who has suffered an outrage she cannot describe to anybody. And Nicholas said nothing either — not out of triumph, but because he was still occupied elsewhere, with a hunter, two remaining arrows, and four wolves closing through the trees while the light went.

Quick check — answer from memory, then reveal:

1. On what grounds does Nicholas refuse to fetch the ladder?

2. Why is the tea table silent — and where is Nicholas's attention?

1. The voice promises strawberry jam, which his aunt had denied existed that morning; therefore, he reasons, the speaker cannot be his aunt but the Evil One in disguise — using her own recent assurance that no such being exists.

2. Because the outing failed (the tide was in, one child's boots pinched) and the aunt has been humiliated in a way she cannot report. Nicholas is silent because his mind is still in the tapestry, working out whether the hunter escapes.

Discuss:
  • He defeats her using only her own statements. Is that a child's cleverness, or an exact demonstration of what her kind of authority is worth?

Grammar — participle clauses

Saki's narrator constantly folds two actions into one sentence: "Having secured his aunt's attention at the wrong door, Nicholas produced the key." This is the single most useful structure for making written English sound adult rather than assembled.

Three forms, three meanings:
• -ing (active, same time): "Standing in front of the tapestry, he worked out the hunter's chances." = while he stood…
• Having + past participle (active, earlier): "Having eaten, they went out." = after they had eaten…
• -ed (passive): "Trapped in the tank, she could only shout." = because/after she was trapped…

They can express time (Opening the door, he saw…), reason (Not knowing the way, we stopped), or result (The tide came in, ruining the afternoon).
The one rule that matters: the subject of the participle must be the subject of the main clause.
✓ "Having checked the corridor, Nicholas unlocked the door." (Nicholas checked; Nicholas unlocked.)
✗ "Having checked the corridor, the door was unlocked." — this says the door checked the corridor. This mistake is called a dangling participle, and examiners hunt for it.

Negatives go in front: "Not having been invited, he stayed at home." · "Not wishing to argue, she said nothing."

1. Combine the two sentences with a participle clause

Rewrite the pair as one sentence, beginning with the participle. Write only the participle clause.

1. He had studied the key for weeks. He opened the lumber room easily. → , he opened the lumber room easily.

2. She was convinced he would try the gooseberry door. She watched it for an hour. → , she watched it for an hour.

3. She slipped on the wet edge. She fell into the tank. → , she fell into the tank.

1. Having studied the key for weeks (earlier action)

2. Convinced (that) he would try the gooseberry door (passive participle giving the reason)

3. Slipping on the wet edge (simultaneous)

2. Repair the dangling participle

Each sentence attaches the participle to the wrong subject. Rewrite the main clause so it works.

1. Standing in the doorway, the tapestry looked enormous. → Standing in the doorway, .

2. Having been excluded from the outing, the afternoon was spent indoors. → Having been excluded from the outing, .

3. Calling for help from the tank, the ladder was nowhere to be seen. → Calling for help from the tank, .

1. …he thought the tapestry looked enormous / …Nicholas found the tapestry enormous.

2. …Nicholas spent the afternoon indoors.

3. …she could see no sign of the ladder.

In every case the person doing the participle action must become the subject of the main clause.

3. Retell the afternoon — complete with participle clauses

Fill each gap with the correct participle form of the verb in brackets, then read the whole paragraph aloud.

(be) told repeatedly that he was excluded from the treat, Nicholas showed no interest in the outing at all. (make) two or three approaches to the gooseberry door, he left his aunt guarding it and went upstairs. (open) the lumber room, he found a tapestry, a book of birds and a china duck. (trap) in the rainwater tank, his aunt called for a ladder. (not / wish) to assist the Evil One, Nicholas walked away, (leave) her to the kitchen maid.

Having been told · Having made · Having opened · Trapped · Not wishing · leaving

Note the final one: a participle after the main clause usually expresses the result — "he walked away, leaving her…".

Hold on to this structure — in the Speak tab, narrating with participle clauses will make your account sound written rather than listed.

Going deeper

Saki was sent from Burma to England as a small child after his mother's death, and raised by two aunts of exactly the type he spent his career dismantling. The comic surface of these stories sits on something colder: a settled conviction that adults use rules not to protect children but to manage them.

The craft. Watch the story's architecture. The aunt's authority rests entirely on statements she has made — no jam in the cupboard, no Evil One, no entry to the gooseberry garden — and Nicholas destroys her using nothing but those statements, in order. It is not rebellion; it is an audit. Note too how Saki distributes the narrative sympathy: the aunt is never physically hurt, only made ridiculous, and the story is careful to make her humiliation undignified rather than tragic. And notice the ending, which refuses the obvious triumph. Saki could have closed on the tank, or on the silence at tea. Instead he closes inside the boy's head, in the tapestry, with the hunter and the wolves — the point being that the imagination Nicholas has been punished all day for possessing is the one thing nobody in that house can confiscate.

Talk it through:
  • Nicholas's argument is technically valid and entirely bad faith. Does the story approve of him, or simply enjoy him?
  • Consider the failed outing at Jagborough. Why does Saki bother to make the treat a disaster as well?
  • The lumber room is a store of things adults decided were finished with. What is the story claiming about imagination and neglect?
  • If the aunt told this story, what would it sound like — and would any part of her version be fair?

Speak

This is the heart of the lesson — do all of it out loud. The timer is there to keep you going: fill the time with detail rather than racing through it.

Useful language: lean on today's structure — Having been excluded…, Knowing that…, Trapped in…, …, leaving her to…. For argument: "The point isn't… it's…", "What she can't admit is…", "In fairness to her…".
Time remaining: 4:00
Task A · Narrate the whole story (4 minutes)

Tell The Lumber Room as if to someone who has never read it. Move through the arc: the frog and the offence of being right → the treat he is excluded from → the aunt at the wrong door → the key and the forbidden room → the tapestry and the book of birds → the voice from the tank → jam, the Evil One, and the walk away → the silent tea.

Use at least three participle clauses and at least five key words (disgrace, self-satisfied, vigilance, tapestry, improvise, retribution, forbidden, humiliated, punitive, defiance).

Task B · Was he entitled to walk away? (4 minutes)

Build an argument. He left an adult stuck in a water tank to score a philosophical point — but she had spent the day constructing his humiliation, and every word he used was hers. Take a side, give three reasons, deal with the strongest objection, and state the principle you think should govern a case like this.

Then argue the opposite side for one minute.

Task C · Rules, imagination and being disbelieved (4 minutes)

Take the story's themes outward.

Stuck for an idea? Pick one of these and run with it:

  • Describe a place that fascinated you as a child, using at least three participle clauses.
  • Finish the tapestry: hunter, two arrows, four wolves, one tree, failing light. Narrate what happens.
  • A rule you consider indefensible — and how you would argue against it to the person who made it.
  • Should adults admit mistakes to young people, or does it cost them something they need?
  • Design your own lumber room: five objects, and the history of one of them.
  • Prohibition makes things interesting. Where does that principle operate in public life — advertising, censorship, politics?

To finish — the bigger questions

  1. Nicholas is punished for being right. What does the story say about how institutions treat inconvenient accuracy?
  2. Both aunt and boy waste the afternoon entirely. Why does the story treat one as absurd and the other as free?
  3. Saki ends inside the tapestry rather than at the tea table. What is he protecting by finishing there?
  4. Before you go — from memory: produce one -ing participle clause, one having + past participle clause and one passive -ed clause about this story — and explain what a dangling participle is.