SHORT STORIES, LONG SHADOWS · B2/C1 · 50 min

The Masque of the Red Death

Edgar Allan Poe — a prince seals a thousand nobles inside a walled abbey and holds a masquerade while a plague waits outside.

Today: you'll tell the story of a prince who sealed himself and a thousand friends inside a walled abbey to outlast a plague — and you'll master inversion and fronting, the structures that turn a plain sentence into a tolling bell: "Never had the prince seen…", "Out of the shadows came…".
Warm up — a few words worth carrying with you. Each one comes from an earlier story in this series. Met it before? Say what it means and use it in a sentence of your own. New to you? Even better — add it today. Reveal to check, and follow a link if you'd like to read the story it comes from.
inevitable — from Appointment in Samarra
What does it mean? Name something people often treat as avoidable when it isn't.
inevitable (adj) — certain to happen; impossible to avoid or prevent.
futile — from Before the Law
What does it mean? Describe an effort — from history or a story — that turned out to be futile.
futile (adj) — pointless; incapable of producing any useful result, however hard you try.
to ravage — from The Last Leaf
What does it mean? What kinds of things can ravage a landscape, a city, an economy?
to ravage (v) — to cause severe, widespread damage; to devastate.
contempt — from The Bet
What does it mean? What's the difference between dislike and contempt?
contempt (n) — the feeling that someone or something is worthless, beneath your respect.
to fade — from Miss Brill
What does it mean? Name three things that fade — one colour, one sound, one feeling.
to fade (v) — to lose colour, strength or presence gradually; to disappear slowly.

Now — the words for today's story

Each new word is hidden in a sentence. Read it aloud and say what you think the bold word means from the rest of the sentence — then reveal it and see how close you were.

1. In the fourteenth century a pestilence swept across Europe, emptying whole towns in a matter of weeks.
a pestilence (n) — a deadly, fast-spreading epidemic disease; figuratively, anything that spreads and destroys.
2. The port held every arriving ship at anchor for forty days, hoping to stop the contagion passing from the sailors to the town.
contagion (n) — the spread of disease by contact; also the rapid spread of a mood or panic ("fear moved through the markets like contagion").
3. After the scandal, the countess withdrew into complete seclusion, seeing no one and never once leaving the walls of her estate.
seclusion (n) — the state of being shut away, alone and hidden from the outside world.
4. The young captain was dauntless: while others fled the burning district, she walked straight into it without a flicker of fear.
dauntless (adj) — fearless; showing no fear even in the face of real danger.
5. The old fortress had a single gate that served for both ingress and egress — one way in, and the very same way out.
ingress / egress (n) — ingress: a way in, the act of entering; egress: a way out, the act of leaving. Formal words, still used in law and architecture.
6. At the Venetian masquerade, no one could tell the duke from his servant: every face in the ballroom was hidden behind a mask.
a masquerade (n) — a ball at which the guests wear masks and costumes; figuratively, a false outward show ("his confidence was a masquerade").
7. The chess set was carved from ivory and ebony, the white pieces gleaming pale beside the deep black of the others.
ebony (n / adj) — a very hard, dense black wood; by extension, anything deep black.
8. Long after midnight the last revellers were still singing in the square, unwilling to let the carnival end.
a reveller (n) — a person enjoying themselves noisily at a party or celebration.
9. By candlelight the old portrait took on a ghastly look, its face as pale and hollow as a corpse's.
ghastly (adj) — horrifying and frightening; deathly pale, like a corpse or a ghost.
10. For three centuries the empire held dominion over half the known world — and then, within a single generation, lost everything.
dominion (n) — total control or sovereign power over a place or people.

Now use them — out loud

Talk it through before we read:
  • Using pestilence, seclusion and masquerade, predict: a rich prince learns that a deadly disease is destroying his country. What do you think he does — and how do you think the story ends?
  • Sort today's ten words out loud into two lists: the party and the plague. Which words could sit in both lists — and why might Poe like those best?

The story, in three parts

Read each part. After it, there's a quick comprehension check (try the questions from memory first), then one thing to discuss. Watch the colours of the rooms, and watch the great black clock — everything in this story moves in one direction.

Part 1 — The plague and the sealed abbey

The "Red Death" had long devastated the country. No pestilence had ever been so fatal, or so hideous. Blood was its Avatar and its seal — the redness and the horror of blood. There were sharp pains, and sudden dizziness, and then profuse bleeding at the pores, with dissolution. The scarlet stains upon the body and especially upon the face of the victim were the pest ban which shut him out from the aid and from the sympathy of his fellow-men. And the whole seizure, progress, and termination of the disease were the incidents of half an hour.

But the Prince Prospero was happy and dauntless and sagacious. When his dominions were half depopulated, he summoned to his presence a thousand hale and light-hearted friends from among the knights and dames of his court, and with these retired to the deep seclusion of one of his castellated abbeys. A strong and lofty wall girdled it in. This wall had gates of iron. The courtiers, having entered, brought furnaces and massy hammers and welded the bolts. They resolved to leave means neither of ingress nor egress to the sudden impulses of despair or of frenzy from within. The abbey was amply provisioned. With such precautions the courtiers might bid defiance to contagion. The external world could take care of itself. In the meantime it was folly to grieve, or to think. The prince had provided all the appliances of pleasure. There were buffoons, there were improvisatori, there were ballet-dancers, there were musicians, there was Beauty, there was wine. All these and security were within. Without was the "Red Death."

Quick check — answer from memory, then reveal:

1. What marks the Red Death's victims, and how long does the whole disease take?

2. What is Prospero's plan — and what do the courtiers do to the gates once they are inside?

1. Scarlet stains on the body and especially the face — marks that cut the victim off from all help and sympathy. From first pains to death takes half an hour.

2. He retreats to a walled abbey with a thousand knights and dames of his court. The courtiers weld the iron gates shut with furnaces and hammers, leaving no way in — and no way out.

Discuss:
  • "All these and security were within. Without was the Red Death." Prospero's walls protect a thousand nobles while the rest of the country is left to "take care of itself". In any disaster, who gets to shut the door — and what do the walls mean for everyone outside them?

Part 2 — The seven rooms and the ebony clock

It was towards the close of the fifth or sixth month of his seclusion, and while the pestilence raged most furiously abroad, that the Prince Prospero entertained his thousand friends at a masked ball of the most unusual magnificence. It was a voluptuous scene, that masquerade. But first let me tell of the rooms in which it was held. There were seven — an imperial suite, with a sharp turn at every twenty or thirty yards, and at each turn a novel effect.

That at the eastern extremity was hung in blue — and vividly blue were its windows. The second chamber was purple, the third green, the fourth orange, the fifth white, the sixth violet — and in each, the panes matched the room. But the seventh apartment was closely shrouded in black velvet tapestries, and here only the windows failed to correspond: the panes were scarlet — a deep blood colour. The effect of the firelight upon the blood-tinted panes was ghastly in the extreme, and produced so wild a look upon the countenances of those who entered that there were few of the company bold enough to set foot within its precincts at all.

It was in this apartment that there stood against the western wall a gigantic clock of ebony. Its pendulum swung to and fro with a dull, heavy, monotonous clang; and when the hour was to be stricken, there came from the brazen lungs of the clock a sound of so peculiar a note that the musicians were constrained to pause to hearken to it; and the waltzers perforce ceased their evolutions; and it was observed that the giddiest grew pale. But when the echoes had fully ceased, a light laughter at once pervaded the assembly, and they made whispering vows, each to the other, that the next chiming of the clock should produce in them no similar emotion. And then, after the lapse of sixty minutes, there came yet another chiming, and then were the same disconcert and tremulousness as before.

Quick check — answer from memory, then reveal:

1. How are the seven rooms arranged and coloured — and which room is different?

2. What happens every time the ebony clock strikes the hour?

1. They run from blue at the eastern end through purple, green, orange, white and violet — each with matching windows — to a seventh, western room: black velvet with scarlet, blood-coloured panes. Few guests dare enter it.

2. The music stops, the dancers freeze, and even the giddiest go pale. When the echoes die, everyone laughs it off and vows not to react next time — and an hour later, they react exactly the same way.

Discuss:
  • Every hour the revellers swear the next chime will not touch them — and every hour it does. Why can't they simply ignore a clock? What is Poe suggesting about the things we promise ourselves not to think about?

Part 3 — The masked figure and the ending

As the clock struck midnight, the crowd became aware of a masked figure which no one had noticed before. The figure was tall and gaunt, shrouded from head to foot in the habiliments of the grave; the mask resembled the countenance of a stiffened corpse. But the mummer had gone so far as to assume the type of the Red Death: his vesture was dabbled in blood, and his broad brow was besprinkled with the scarlet horror.

When the eyes of Prince Prospero fell upon this spectral image, he was convulsed with a strong shudder; then his brow reddened with rage. "Who dares," he demanded hoarsely, "who dares insult us with this blasphemous mockery? Seize him and unmask him — that we may know whom we have to hang at sunrise!"

But the intruder, with slow and solemn movement, passed uninterruptedly through the blue chamber to the purple — through the purple to the green — through the green to the orange — through this to the white — and thence to the violet, ere any decided movement had been made to arrest him. Then Prospero, maddening with rage and the shame of his own momentary cowardice, rushed through the six chambers; none followed him, for a deadly terror had seized upon all. He bore aloft a drawn dagger and had come within three or four feet of the figure when it turned suddenly, in the black chamber, and confronted its pursuer. There was a sharp cry — and the dagger dropped gleaming upon the sable carpet, upon which, instantly afterwards, fell prostrate in death the Prince Prospero.

Then a throng of revellers, summoning the wild courage of despair, threw themselves into the black apartment — and gasped in unutterable horror: the grave-cerements and corpse-like mask they seized were untenanted by any tangible form. And now was acknowledged the presence of the Red Death. He had come like a thief in the night. And one by one dropped the revellers in the blood-bedewed halls of their revel, and died each in the despairing posture of his fall. And Darkness and Decay and the Red Death held illimitable dominion over all.

Quick check — answer from memory, then reveal:

1. What is the midnight guest wearing, and why does it enrage the prince?

2. What do the revellers find when they finally seize the figure — and what happens next?

1. Grave-clothes and a corpse-like mask, dabbled in blood — the costume of a Red Death victim. It mocks the one thing the whole abbey was built to shut out.

2. Nothing. The shroud and mask are empty — "untenanted by any tangible form". Then the Red Death takes them all: one by one the revellers drop, and Darkness and Decay hold dominion over all.

Discuss:
  • The figure walks calmly west through all seven rooms, and Prospero's chase runs from the blue room of dawn to the black room of night. Why does Poe make the prince's last journey follow that exact path?

Grammar — Inversion & Fronting for Emphasis

Poe does not write "The revellers dropped one by one." He writes "And one by one dropped the revellers" — he lifts a phrase to the front and turns the sentence around, and the prose tolls like his clock. This is fronting (putting a phrase first for effect) and inversion (swapping the normal subject–verb order). Master both and your English gains a whole dramatic register.

1 · Negative & restrictive inversion. When a sentence begins with a negative or restrictive expression — Never, No sooner… than, Only then / Only when…, Not only, Scarcely… when, In vain — the subject and auxiliary invert, as in a question:
• "Never had the prince seen so insolent a costume."
• "No sooner had the clock struck than the music died."
• "Only when the shroud was seized did the revellers understand."
• "In vain did they weld the gates." (= they welded them, and it was futile)
2 · Fronting for drama. Beyond the fixed triggers, a writer can front a phrase of place or manner and put the verb before the subject: "Out of the shadows came a masked figure." / "Against the western wall stood a gigantic clock of ebony." / "One by one dropped the revellers." The action arrives before we learn who it happened to — pure theatre. Use it sparingly: one toll of the bell is drama; ten is noise.

1. Rewrite each sentence, starting with the words given

1. The prince had never seen so ghastly a costume. →
Never

2. The clock struck midnight, and at that very moment the figure appeared. →
No sooner

3. The revellers understood the truth only when the shroud was found empty. →
Only when the shroud was found empty

4. The courtiers welded the gates, but it achieved nothing. →
In vain

1. Never had the prince seen so ghastly a costume.

2. No sooner had the clock struck midnight than the figure appeared.

3. Only when the shroud was found empty did the revellers understand the truth.

4. In vain did the courtiers weld the gates.

2. Front the phrase in brackets and invert — verb before subject

1. A masked figure came out of the shadows. (front Out of the shadows) →
Out of the shadows

2. A gigantic ebony clock stood against the western wall. (front Against the western wall) →
Against the western wall

3. The revellers dropped one by one. (front One by one) →
One by one

1. Out of the shadows came a masked figure.

2. Against the western wall stood a gigantic ebony clock.

3. One by one dropped the revellers.

3. Complete the paragraph with inversion structures

Fill each gap so the retelling reads with full dramatic inversion. Then read the finished paragraph aloud — slowly, like a bell.

No sooner the clock struck midnight a masked figure appeared among the dancers. Never the prince so insolent a guest. In vain he his dagger: out of the seventh room no sound but his own cry. Only when the shroud was seized the revellers the truth — that the figure was empty, and that Death itself had walked among them.

No sooner had the clock struck midnight than a masked figure appeared… · Never had the prince seen so insolent a guest. · In vain did he raise his dagger: out of the seventh room came no sound but his own cry. · Only when the shroud was seized did the revellers understand the truth.

Each inversion holds the subject back and lets the drama land first — the sentence tolls, exactly like the ebony clock.

Hold on to these — you'll want them in the Speak tab, where one well-placed inversion can silence a room.

Going deeper — take the idea further

You have the story and the words. Now push the ideas outward — argue, disagree, change your mind. Do all of this out loud. There are no right answers here, only good reasons.

Useful language for building an argument: "What's striking is…", "You could argue that…", "Never in history has…", "Only when X happens do people…", "That may be true, but…".
1 · Who gets to shut the door?

Prospero's walls save a thousand nobles and abandon everyone else. The pattern didn't die in 1842: gated communities, private islands, survival bunkers, cities where the rich district has clean water and the poor one doesn't. Is buying your way out of a shared danger a right, a privilege, or a betrayal? Where would you draw the line — and who should draw it?

2 · Dancing while the world burns

"It was folly to grieve, or to think" — so the abbey throws a party. History is full of this: carnivals during plagues, orchestras playing on sinking ships, cabarets in wartime cities. Is celebrating in the middle of a catastrophe denial — or a kind of courage? Can it be both at once? Argue each side before you settle.

3 · Giving death a face

For centuries artists have personified death: the hooded figure with a scythe, the skeleton who leads the medieval "Dance of Death", the pale stranger who plays chess in The Seventh Seal, Poe's empty shroud. Why do we keep giving a costume to something that has no body? Is a death you can see and name more frightening than one you can't — or less?

4 · The prince's duty

Imagine a coastal city that knows a devastating storm is coming. The mayor has one enormous fortune to spend: reinforce the villas on the hill (certain to work, saves the few) or the flood walls of the whole harbour (uncertain, might save everyone). A ship's captain is expected to leave last — what does a prince owe his people? Decide what the mayor should do, then judge Prospero by your own rule.

Speak

This is the heart of the lesson — do all of it out loud. The timer is there to keep you going: fill the time with detail rather than escaping it.

Useful language: toll your big moments with inversion — "Never had the prince seen…", "No sooner had the clock struck than…", "Out of the shadows came…". Weave in today's words: pestilence, contagion, seclusion, dauntless, ingress/egress, masquerade, ebony, reveller, ghastly, dominion.
Time remaining: 4:00
Task A · Tell the whole story (4 minutes)

Tell the story of the Masque of the Red Death in your own words, as if to someone who has never read it. Move through the arc: the Red Death ravaging the land → the sealed abbey and the welded gates → the masquerade through seven coloured rooms → the ebony clock that stops the dancers → the midnight figure in the blood-spattered shroud → the chase from blue to black → the empty costume, and the final line.

Use at least two inversion or fronting structures at the big moments, and work in five of today's key words.

Task B · Take one side (4 minutes)

Pick one position and argue it as persuasively as you can: "With enough money, you really can wall out almost any danger" or "Wealth buys only the illusion of safety — never the thing itself." Use examples from history, the news, films or books. Then switch: for one minute, make the best possible case for the side you disagree with.

Task C · The ebony clock speaks (4 minutes)

You are the gigantic ebony clock in the seventh room. You have stood against the western wall all night, striking the hours. Tell the story of the ball as you witnessed it — the colours glimpsed through the doorways, the dancers freezing at every chime, the stranger who finally stopped beside you at midnight. Fronting is your natural voice: "Through my chamber came…", "At my feet fell…".

To finish — the bigger questions

  1. Poe names his prince "Prospero" — after Shakespeare's magician-duke who commands an entire island. What is the irony in giving that name to a man whose commands, in the end, control nothing?
  2. The figure is found "untenanted by any tangible form" — an enemy with no body to fight and no face to unmask. Why is that more terrifying than any monster Poe could have described?
  3. The story never tells us to feel sorry for the thousand revellers — or does it? Re-read the ending in your mind: is this a punishment, a tragedy, or simply the truth arriving?
  4. Before you go — from memory: give one negative inversion (Never… / No sooner… / Only when…) and one dramatic fronting (Out of the shadows came…) about this story, and say what each one throws its spotlight on.