A six-lesson programme from Band 5 to Band 7 — one paragraph shape, one verb toolkit, one self-mark protocol.
Each lesson is 50 minutes. Open in order — every lesson builds on the previous one. The Reference materials are teacher-facing and should not be opened on the student's screen.
The ladder from identification → description → analysis. Diagnoses what is missing in current writing using sample Orwell passages and the student's own recent essay.
Lesson 2 · 50 minA library of 15 named techniques in 3 categories. Spotting game, Orwell close-read, annotation practice.
Lesson 3 · 50 minThe verb toolkit — positions, unsettles, reframes. The half of the sentence that earns Band 6+ marks. Animal Farm practice.
Lesson 4 · 50 min5 paragraph slots: Position, Apply, Connect, Evaluate, Reader. Annotated models on unseen extracts and Orwell. Build-your-own scaffold.
Lesson 5 · 50 minConnector toolkit for integrated comparison. Where… / by contrast / together… Rebuild a stapled paragraph into an integrated one.
Lesson 6 · 50 minUnseen Woolf passage. 10-min plan, 30-min write, 10-min self-mark with the Criterion A rubric. Click-to-start timers.
Companion practice for Lesson 3 (Effect on the Reader). Each lesson takes a canonical short story and drills the same loop: spot the technique, name it precisely, and pin down the effect verb — what the text does to the reader. Order is flexible; pick whatever fits the student's interest.
Free-indirect discourse, bathos, and the verbs of pity and disdain. How the narrator's distance unsettles the reader's sympathy.
PoeUnreliable narration, repetition, and rising syntax. The verbs that name how a sentence destabilises the reader.
BierceShifting time, sensory imagery, and the twist. Verbs of perception and misdirection — how structure manipulates trust.
ChopinCompression, irony, and the verb that pivots — "abandoned", "reframed", "released". A masterclass in how a short text changes the reader's stance.
JacobsForeshadowing, the rule of three, and atmosphere. Verbs of dread — how the text tightens, encloses, foreshadows.
SakiEmbedded narrative, comic deflation, and the verbs of misdirection. How a single line "recasts" everything the reader has just believed.
The IB has two relevant programmes. A typical diagnostic worksheet — hybrid of MCQ comprehension and essay analysis — fits both, but the essay register ("authorial choices", "effects on the reader") is firmly in the Diploma Programme (DP) register. Most students using this course are in DP1 (Year 12) preparing for Paper 1.
Four criteria, each marked out of 8:
Final assessment in Year 11 (eAssessment). Worksheets in this programme tend to use simpler register — "techniques and their effects" rather than "authorial choices".
Three external assessments:
The typical diagnostic worksheet — "authorial choices" + reader effect — is straight DP Criterion A territory. This is the most likely match.
| Criterion | What it measures | Where this course targets it | |
|---|---|---|---|
| A | Analysis & Evaluation | Understanding of the text + interpretation of authorial choices and their effects. | Lessons 1, 2, 3, 6 — the spine of the course. |
| B | Focus & Organisation | Coherent structure, paragraph development, logical sequencing. | Lessons 4 (PACER) + 5 (integration). |
| C | Knowledge & Understanding (Paper 2) | Grasp of the studied literary works and their context. | Targeted in separate literature lessons (not in this course). |
| D | Language | Clarity, accuracy, register, style of the student's own prose. | Light-touch coverage in Lesson 6 self-mark; a separate "register" lesson would deepen this if needed. |
Each lesson trains specific sub-skills. The grid below shows where each is introduced (●) and where it is reinforced (◐).
| Sub-skill | L1 | L2 | L3 | L4 | L5 | L6 |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Move beyond identification → analysis | ● | ◐ | ◐ | ◐ | ◐ | ◐ |
| Name techniques precisely | ◐ | ● | ◐ | ◐ | ◐ | ◐ |
| Articulate effect on the reader | ◐ | ◐ | ● | ◐ | ◐ | ◐ |
| Build a paragraph with a thesis | ◐ | ● | ◐ | ◐ | ||
| Connect two pieces of evidence | ◐ | ● | ◐ | ◐ | ||
| Evaluate (zoom out from evidence) | ◐ | ● | ◐ | ◐ | ||
| Compare two texts / two moments | ◐ | ● | ◐ | |||
| Use precise academic register | ◐ | ● | ● | ◐ | ● | ◐ |
| Self-assess against a rubric | ◐ | ◐ | ◐ | ● |
● = primary focus ◐ = practised / reinforced
If you only get one slot rather than six, run a diagnostic-and-toolkit lesson:
| File | Audience | Purpose |
|---|---|---|
| ib_lesson_01_three_levels.html | Student | Lesson 1 (50 min) |
| ib_lesson_02_naming_techniques.html | Student | Lesson 2 (50 min) |
| ib_lesson_03_effect_on_reader.html | Student | Lesson 3 (50 min) |
| ib_lesson_04_pacer_framework.html | Student | Lesson 4 (50 min) |
| ib_lesson_05_comparing_not_stapling.html | Student | Lesson 5 (50 min) |
| ib_lesson_06_timed_essay.html | Student | Lesson 6 (50 min) — assessment |
| ib_lesson_01_answer_key.html | Teacher only | L1 worked answers + 50-min flow |
| ib_teacher_tracker.html | Teacher only | Private progress dashboard |
| ib_course_dashboard.html | Both | This page — programme overview |